Even though the jersey does look like a cadence x raphia collab, I dig it. I'm not sure which color I like best. I think the pink looks great, but it makes it look way too much like a rapha rip off.
Please don't put "track parties" or "god speed" on the sleeve. If anything, use some logos/websites from our crew on the back pockets. Maybe cycleangelos logo/website, rime logo/website, I'd put my blog logo even though mine isn't big time like angelos.
or logos somewhere on the back like my IminusD jersey:
I like the layout on the chrome jersey too... one black sleeve, simple layout etc...